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Sometimes hasty writing requires corrections

August 19, 2002

One recent evening as my wife, kids and mother-in-law took a

cruise along Back Bay Drive, we got an inadvertent lesson in the

responsibility, or what some would call irresponsibility, of the

press.

"This is the road where that guy was killed by the paintball

shooters," I told my mother-in-law. "You remember that story, right?"

Of course she did. Yeah, the paintball killers. Whatever happened

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with that, she asked?

Well, actually, I had to correct myself, we thought he was killed

by paintball snipers, but it turns out we had it all wrong, I told

her.

And now that's something I need to make sure all of our readers

know as well.

The guy I was talking about was one Gary Holdren, a Park Newport

resident who tragically lost his life April 9, two weeks after being

discovered unconscious on the popular bayside road on which joggers,

bikers and inline skaters can be seen daily.

The original story, as told to us by the Newport Beach police,

went like this: Holdren, wearing inline skates, was found on the road

knocked near lifeless with severe injuries to his eye and head.

Splattered about him was paint from a paintball gun. Police cited

witnesses who reported that three "youthful males" were seen in the

area with paintball guns.

Pretty clear evidence that paintball shooters were the culprits,

right?

Our first headline on March 26 said as much: "Paintball assault

leaves skater critical."

Subsequent stories and columns went on to surmise that indeed

paintball shooters were lurking in the bushes of the Back Bay, firing

at unsuspecting targets.

Bigger newspapers picked up the story as did television stations.

Rumors swirled that Holdren was a victim of either a prank gone

awry or some evildoers bent on pelting people with paint, evildoers

or pranksters who had not owned up to their crime.

But slowly, the paintball story started to change as coroner

officials downplayed the significance of a paintball strike and

instead proposed that Holdren had been injured by falling while

inline skating and then striking the back of his head, causing trauma

to his skull and brain.

Finally, on Aug. 9, four months to the day of Holdren's death, we

finished our reporting with the story that concluded: "Paintball

pellets not the cause of death.'' At least that's what the coroner is

telling us now.

We still get letters to this day, urging the paintball shooters to

come clean and admit to their crime -- even though it's possible

there never were any paintball shooters at all.

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